School Uniforms?
We should get rid of school uniforms, or should we?
This has been a very controversial question. Many students prefer to have no uniform because they want to express themselves. But are wearing mufti clothing really beneficial for students? In reality, they are not. School uniforms are very propitious they promote equality, prevent gang colours and symbols and make it easy to get ready for school.
This may not be obvious but wearing school uniforms promote equality. This is because students are dressed alike and don't need to worry about others who look more fashionable. Studies show that when students wear uniforms in school it reduces bullying. How? Well, they won't have pressure on them by their peers, to wear the latest clothing or get judged by what clothes they wear. Because it doesn't matter if you're from a low-income household or a high-income household, every student is wearing the same clothing. Students deserve to be treated equally!
Schools uniforms prevent gang colours and symbols. If we had to wear mufti clothing this would be a great opportunity for gang members to reveal their signs and colours within the clothing. This would lead to many people joining gangs so they can feel apart of a popular group. Uniforms are a great way of feeling apart of the group and stopping gangs in the school. Gang colours and symbols shouldn't be allowed in the school compounds. Uniforms make sure these situations do not happen.
School uniforms make it easy to get ready for school. As we know students are often late to school, and by having a uniform they can quickly put on, it makes it so much easier. Whereas if they had to wear the clothing of their choice, students would take much longer deciding what they would want to wear. Pupils don't have to take 1-hour choosing what outfit they could wear, or which one their peers would like the most. With uniforms, they are a great saviour for lateness. A study was done in the University of Housten and it stated that schoolchildren who wear uniforms have better attendance and grades than students who do not. Uniforms are better! No more arguing about what to wear in the morning.
We know that many school students would prefer themselves with mufti clothing, but it's not beneficial. Uniforms help promote equality, with students dressing alike. They prevent gang colours and symbols in the school. Lastly, they are so quick and easy to put on with no arguing about what to wear. Uniforms should be kept! They are an essential part of the school. Uniforms promote their school inside and outside. So should we get rid of uniforms?
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ReplyDeleteI like how you added in the website where you got the information from. i think its important to have a uniform so i completely agree with you, schools should keep uniforms COMPULSORY.
I like how you obviously thought about your sentence structures for each paragraph as you have a range of sentence starters, not just the common 'subject-verb' start. You also have more variety in sentence length than your last text I read so your writing now has a more interesting rhythm. There are a few minor errors in punctuation but they don't change the meaning of your sentences. You can easily fix this yourself by reading your text aloud and listening for where pauses and stops should be.
ReplyDeleteThis is great, Nidhi!
ReplyDeleteYour ideas are developed and your arguments are organized.
I liked the point on students being equal.
As mentioned above, just a few minor punctuation errors, such as in the opening question. It might be better read as "We should get rid of school uniforms...or should we?" or "Should we, or shouldn't we get rid of school uniforms?"
Or simply "Should we get rid of school uniforms?"