In English class, we are focusing on creative writing and this is my finished copy. Instead of writing a short story I chose to write, chapter one of a novel.
The opening sentence is a strong hook. Great to see you've worked with the feedback and have made final improvements to your writing. I enjoyed reading it. It will be interesting to learn more about the man with the mask!
Great writing, Nidhi!
ReplyDeleteThe opening sentence is a strong hook.
Great to see you've worked with the feedback and have made final improvements to your writing. I enjoyed reading it. It will be interesting to learn more about the man with the mask!